Get Your Premium Membership

And Then It Happened

AND THEN IT HAPPENED . . . . I remember being outside the building. I had good intentions for being there. I left my horse tied to a dumpster in the alley. There were so many decisions to make, so much to consider. My future hung in the balance and my fears were greater than I anticipated. I crept stealthily into the lobby, took the elevator to the tenth floor. And then it happened . . . . 9 March For the contest sponsored by Robert Haigh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/15/2018 9:39:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Curtis , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
Login to Reply
Moorman Avatar
Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/19/2018 4:54:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Your comments are so sincere and encouraging. I appreciate your invaluable support.
Date: 3/14/2018 11:58:00 PM
Nicely done - exciting write! Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Curtis - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-)
Login to Reply
Moorman Avatar
Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/15/2018 12:15:00 AM
Thank you for these kind remarks Greg. It's good to hear from you. I know your busy schedule keeps you on the move. I pray all is well with you and that 2018 is proving to be fruitful for you. God Bless you, my friend!
Date: 3/14/2018 9:24:00 PM
Congrats, Curtis, and thanks for leaving us with a cliffhanger :)
Login to Reply
Moorman Avatar
Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/14/2018 11:30:00 PM
Thanks, Viv! First cliffhanger I have written. It seemed to catch on. Maybe I'll do another one at some point. I appreciate your support and encouragement.
Date: 3/14/2018 3:39:00 PM
Bravo, Curtis. Back with congrats.
Login to Reply
Moorman Avatar
Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/14/2018 4:13:00 PM
Thanks, Line! It came quite as a surprise. I know you read parts 2, 3, and the finale. I wrote it more in fun than a possible winner in a contest but am flattered and honored that it placed.
Date: 3/12/2018 8:01:00 PM
What happened?
Login to Reply
Moorman Avatar
Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/12/2018 9:53:00 PM
I'll tell you in the sequel. lol Thanks for your response.
Date: 3/10/2018 10:52:00 AM
Wow, Lines right, you need to do a follow up. Good luck.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2018 10:42:00 PM
You are so funny, Curtis ! Is there a sequel?
Login to Reply
Moorman Avatar
Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/9/2018 10:54:00 PM
Kinda sneaky, huh? I enjoy suspense and practical jokes. They seem to draw attention by their content. I'm always pleased to see your name appear on my screen. You are one of my most ardent supporters. I appreciate your interest in my work. Thank you, line!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things