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If I repeatedly knock on your heart's door, would you unlock it for me? Is there... enough room for both of us? Suppose I ring the bell, or plead, would you grant me an invitation tonight, or keep me locked out in the cold? Would you let me stay in your heart forever? Is it a home? Would you... kindly give me a spare key? Would you let me sneak in and make your heart whole, if I promise I'm yours for keeps? STRAND PICK 10,any theme,any form contest (Winner: 3rd place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 04/10/2020 Date written and posted: 8/20/2016

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Date: 4/13/2020 1:13:00 AM
Edward, really wonderful metaphor for pursuing the one you love. Congrats on the win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/13/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you, John:-) Stay safe out there, my friend!

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