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An Innocent Childhood Memory

Set myself on the swing, Planning and preparing to touch the sunlit sky, Wooden wing! My toes twiddle, My little feet give that push high, Giggle! Can you There see me fly? Whoo! Set myself on the swing, My little feet give that push high, Whoo! 08.11.2020 Contest: Let's Minichu on an innocent childhood memory Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 9/2/2020 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Flying in a swing was so much fun just like this write. Enjoy your win and day.....................
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Date: 8/31/2020 9:01:00 PM
Jo, I'm with Kim - I just love the "wooden wing". So clever and creates that feeling of flying through the air. Congrats on your win with your minichu ~ John
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Date: 8/31/2020 9:43:00 AM
Jo, I love “wooden wing.” Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/31/2020 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win! I thought it would be a winner when I read it earlier!!
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Date: 8/31/2020 9:00:00 AM
Jo, Fun at swings in childhood. Sky is the limit then. Perfect Minichu. Congrats on top win. Mohan.
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Date: 8/11/2020 1:57:00 PM
this is just adorable. One of my favorites I read in this form so far!
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Date: 8/11/2020 6:36:00 AM
- WhOO, Jo ! - A lovely poem :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/11/2020 4:41:00 AM
Lovely sights and sounds of childhood memory--so well written, Jo..in this difficult form!
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Date: 8/11/2020 2:56:00 AM
Glorious write!! We were all there!! A winner for me!
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