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An eight-tiered cake, rose frosted, nothing fake but purely sweet and white down to each flake of coconut! Oh how long did it take the artist of this masterpiece to make? All other foods for this one I’d forsake. A plate of golden fries with prime rib steak could not entice me more than wedding cake, each swirl so delicate my heart might ache to see it ravished; my hand starts to shake the fork I hold. I simply must partake. Just let me at it now, for heaven’s sake! Feb. 28, 2017 for the Relishing Cake Poetry Contest of Julia Ward

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Date: 3/8/2017 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations Andy! Beautiful and well done! big hugs and love. deb
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Date: 3/8/2017 8:29:00 AM
Thats the way to describe a mouth-watering cake!Congrats Andrea!
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Date: 3/7/2017 3:54:00 PM
Tasty..Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/7/2017 6:05:00 AM
Wedding cake's are the crown of cakes! Back for congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 3/7/2017 2:21:00 AM
Wonderful rhyme and description - congrats, well-deserved, Andrea!
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Date: 3/6/2017 8:32:00 PM
Gorgeous pic and fantastic descriptiive piece to accompany, ephrastic poetry. I'm with you, nothing like white cake, white icing and plenty of it. Wedding, birthday or any other occasion. Super monorhyme which doesn't interfere at all with your flow.
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Date: 3/5/2017 8:16:00 PM
This amusing write sure enough pushed my silly button. I'm still giggling, even got a visual! Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:28:00 AM
Great write... the monorhyme enhances the imagery of the scene, with an injection of humour.
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Date: 3/4/2017 6:33:00 PM
I love this one, Andrea! The rhyme scheme adds to the playfulness of the poem, and I don't trust people who don't like cake especially wedding cake! I was looking for your tanka for Vienna' s contest. I fell in love with the colors and innocence of that picture...looking forward to reading your entry when you're done. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/3/2017 4:32:00 PM
Wonderfully written,,, a 7 and a winner ~* Hugs
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Date: 3/2/2017 7:53:00 PM
A winner! Sounds delicious! 7
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Date: 3/2/2017 6:42:00 PM
Love the picture you found that goes so well with your fantastic vividly scrumptious poem.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/2/2017 6:53:00 PM
thanks, my sweet sis. Wish I'd had this at MY wedding.
Date: 3/2/2017 1:00:00 AM
Excellent monorhyme my friend. Interesting write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/1/2017 7:15:00 AM
Am sure that you wanted to HAVE at it. Don't know if I would like relish on my wedding cake though.
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/7/2017 2:27:00 AM
To "relish" means to like.

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