An Echo

shall any sensation my form caress? the beat, wild like thunder, the welcome to an endless symphony rhythm, like a feather falling softly breathless, speechless to be aching to know, an echo - - _________________ ~ thoughts from the heart ~ just a little scribble

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Running Wolves

Date: 1/17/2020 8:53:00 AM

Echos of loves sensations...gently strum my heartstrings...creating rythyms of tender urgency...vibrations of bliss...reverberating unto my very core...releasing sighs which echo in return... Mmmm...what you inspire is amazingly sweet...

Running Wolves
Date: 1/17/2020 12:46:00 PM

I've said it before, I'll say it again, you write like a goddess of poetry... and you inspire these comments... you poor thang for having to put up with me...lol

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/17/2020 11:13:00 AM

Your thoughts are so beautiful and poetic. Thank you for your reading this scribble of mine. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

David Byrne

Date: 1/23/2019 11:16:00 PM

well written................

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/24/2019 1:10:00 PM

Thank you David. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/23/2019 12:16:00 PM

Hi Brandy, As I mentioned before, intoxicating - very well penned! Poetry hugs and wishes, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/23/2019 6:56:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer. :) Your thoughts lift my heart. I appreciate your lovely comment. Hugs, Brandy

Silent One

Date: 1/22/2019 4:51:00 AM

Simply beautiful..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/22/2019 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 1/21/2019 6:10:00 PM

Echoes travel a long way Brandy, they all land somewhere. Beautiful scribble as always...keep warming our hearts :) Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/21/2019 7:00:00 PM

Yes, an echo can move for miles. Touching and then coming back to the one who sent it. Your kind words are always appreciated. Thank you Charlie. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/20/2019 7:47:00 AM

An echo of rhythm and beat..words stemming from symphony within...speechless in awe of creativity. Well written, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/20/2019 6:42:00 PM

"speechless in awe of creativity" Yes, I love this thought. You should place it in a poem. Thank you Vijay. It is an ache to know all. Every sensation. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 1/20/2019 6:46:00 AM

A beautiful scribble, Brandy, your form caresses every sensation! Thank you for being You. All my best. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/20/2019 6:39:00 PM

Thank you John. There are so many moments, expressions and emotions. Sensations. Longing to feel them all. As the poem states. "Aching to know an echo" This could hold soooo many different meanings indeed. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 1/20/2019 6:13:00 AM

The beauty of an endless symphony...Wonderful write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/20/2019 6:37:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. Your thoughts are always appreciated. :) Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 1/20/2019 3:41:00 AM

Another very sensual little scribble, Brandy, nicely done.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/20/2019 6:36:00 PM

Thank you Lawrence. It seems with sensuality- being a part of me, these moments like to touch. I appreciate you. It is very kind of you to read my poetic scribbles. :) Brandy