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An Astral Sight of My Heart

I’ve wandered in my mind’s wasteland on the splinters of my broken heart, on the scorching time’s parched sand, the abyss of discord kept us apart. I’ll take you to my garden path with me, together we’ll begin there a new journey. I’ve travelled a long tiring pathway across the desolate desert of despair. From now on I won’t ever stray away, for the haze has now lifted from the air. I’ll take you to my garden path with me, together we’ll begin there a new journey. I’ll hold your hands, won’t let you go, walk my yearning through the amorous night on your moondust sprayed meadow. Look up, you’ll then see an astral sight. I’ll take you to my garden path with me, together we’ll begin there a new journey. My heart turns to tinsel sky sparkling far, look at the stars, look at how they shine for you and everything you do.
"Look at the stars, look at how they shine for you and everything you do."- Coldplay-Yellow February 20, 2020 Contest : Famous Poetic Lines 3 - Love Songs Sponsor : Silent One

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Date: 2/23/2020 11:44:00 PM
Subimal, You weaved the required line into the ending of your poem like a master poet and made it stand out like the shimmering stars themselves. Brava! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! xxoo
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Date: 2/23/2020 8:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2020 5:17:00 AM
Great imagery in this romantic poetry of yearning... great last stanza also.. you were truly inspired.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest...
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