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An Angel In Your Eyes On February 1st 1966, I saw the brightest moon, The coolest moon ever that has shone in my life. As the space craft Luna-II landed on to the moon Same time Luna was born to Chandrika, my wife. Luna-II, the spacecraft landing in precincts of moon My Luna rising in the precincts of a maternity home I was all ears hearing news but my heart was tuned To the phone conjuring up hospital scene blythesome I did not utter, think or react as my family did feel But felt something inside me I never felt before it As if a cool light generated and rooted and reeled From moon to earth living up to her name sweet. +++++++ ================================ Dr. Ram Mehta - /15-10-13/ !0th place win Contest: An Angel in your eyes by Gail Angel Doyle

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Date: 11/13/2013 10:52:00 PM
A beautiful piece. It was very enjoyable to read, Dr. Mehta. How old is Luna now, if you don't mind my inquiring?
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 11/14/2013 7:38:00 PM
She is 47 years old and living in Canada
Date: 11/12/2013 9:52:00 AM
congrats Dr. Ram.
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Date: 11/12/2013 6:47:00 AM
Nice win Dr. Ram, I can't wait for your next one. Roger
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Date: 11/12/2013 4:05:00 AM
A wonderful write Dr Ram and thanks again for your kind comments on various poems I have written. Robert CD
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Date: 11/11/2013 8:07:00 PM
I enjoyed reading again, Dr. Ram! BIG congrats to you!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/11/2013 6:42:00 PM
beautiful poem ....congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 11/11/2013 4:05:00 PM
wonderful poem, what a blessed memory! congrats on your win! enjoy the journey, Stacey
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Date: 10/23/2013 1:23:00 PM
Very cool juxtaposition, Doc. Very sweet and heartfelt; kudos, my friend! :)
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Date: 10/19/2013 6:24:00 PM
What a beautiful name- your daughter was named Luna. Thank you for your comments. love phyl
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Date: 10/19/2013 5:42:00 PM
Very beautiful and touching! A wonderfully written poem, Dr., I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the nice comments, once again.
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Date: 10/17/2013 5:26:00 PM
Smile, Very Nice As Beautiful This Comparison Of Life Unto Celestial Light * Shine Bright Sweet Luna ~ Thank You For Your Kind Visit Also Dr. Mehta; Much Appreciated. Love, John
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Date: 10/17/2013 3:03:00 PM
beautiful Dr Ram you cover both events with plume lovely flow to your rhyme gl in contest Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/17/2013 2:58:00 PM
wow you sure pen beautiful
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem for the contest. Good luck my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/17/2013 7:03:00 AM
The quiet intensity and expansive love that fills this poem are stunning.
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Date: 10/17/2013 4:34:00 AM
Dr. Ram, a nice flow in your rhyming poem - beautiful. - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2013 3:00:00 AM
NICE POEM........................... RAM THANKS FOR VISITING MY POEM.....
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Date: 10/17/2013 1:08:00 AM
Great Rhyme MEHTA & blessed be Luna, she will dwell in the celestial like her namesake Luna ll. Great tribute to daughter! JM
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Date: 10/17/2013 12:41:00 AM
May she shine forever in your eyes my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/16/2013 10:54:00 PM
I can tell that your Luna is the light of your life...A beautiful, heartfelt poem you have shared tonight, Dr. Ram!
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