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an absinthe eventide

* A bit of mystical fun in honor of a favorite movie “Midnight In Paris” - if you haven’t seen it, I recommend it highly. *

                  ~

I sauntered thru an evening mist
          a midnight's heaven magic-kissed
               lamp-lit raindrops pattered awesome
     glist’ning town turned violet blossom
with charms I dared not e'er resist

          drifting on that Paris proper
               wandered I, a Yankee pauper
     ‘til sweet Latin damsel's ride
paused to pull me quick inside
          (not that I had mind to stop her)

               away - off to another world
     the lass and I were aptly hurled
a night of excess spinning fast
          as absinthe flavored our repast
               its savor mixed our lips and swirled

     so club-to-club we smartly hopped
had more green nectar if we flopped
          we pushed the limits to their graves
               and fueled our backseat carnal craves
     thus on-and-onward 'til we dropped

all seems just dream now in my mind
          and yet I'd swear that when we dined
               some famous folks from ages hence
     had joined our group for merriments
and through all mischief we could find

          the grandest writers in their day
               F. Scott and Zelda - Hemingway!
     as Gertrude Stein and Porter, Cole
thus pined polemic from their soul
          on death and love, the friendly fray

               no one discourse was too far-fetched
     as other greats so talked and sketched
Degas, Picasso, and Toulouse-Lautrec
          Gauguin and Man Ray gave Dali heck
               while on those wilding hours stretched

     ever poured the em’rald potion
crazy cogs with constant motion
          to cloud quite thick the mental fog
               stirred far beyond the hair-of-dog
     toasts then raised for every notion

so went the night 'til all went black
          I woke some days hence in my sack
               believing then that all these things
     I’d dreamt with night's meanderings
daft ramblings of a drunken quack

          thus setting mind to purge it all
               I grabbed my phone to make a call
     then spotted on my chair, the note
edged o’er the pocket of my coat
          and quick, I scrunched it to a ball

               you see - I recognized the write
     I'd seen it clear that misty night
when with absinthe, we'd our fill
          and Hemingway  … had signed the bill!
               so … off I sauntered thru the night ...

     too scared to find out ... I was right.





Copyright © 2025 Gregory Richard Barden

( photographic art created copyright-free by the poet with GALA AI software )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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