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An Abrupt Departure

I find myself at a cross road. Which way should I go? To my left is uncertainty. To my right is a dead end. So I'm stuck and I can't move. I have no choice but to exit UP My private jet is on the way Goodbye my friends.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/14/2018 10:21:00 AM

Going skyward heaven bound, eh. That's a righteous ride then, Alexis. Cool poem w/a rocket blast message. Stellar poetry. Love and more love always.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/1/2018 7:12:00 AM

Different and a pleasure to read, Thanks, Alexis.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2018 6:39:00 PM

what a cool concept, Alexis. Exit UP!!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/31/2018 4:47:00 PM

Lol, I really enjoyed preading this wonderful poem of yours, I was expecting a rather sad or complicated ending, but you made it simple and I am glad that this story end up with a happy ending, good luck my friend and have a really nice day

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/31/2018 2:19:00 PM

Take care Alexis. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/31/2018 3:13:00 PM

I certainly will Alexis. Tom

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/31/2018 2:30:00 PM

Hi Tom, Thanks. I have appreciated your continued support. I shall return. PS, When you have the time can you read my series title " The Ailing Queen. It has 8 parts and they are scattered throughout pages 2 and 3:-) Alexis

John Gondolf

Date: 7/31/2018 11:44:00 AM

Hi Alexis, I'm not sure what you are saying but best of luck always. I have appreciated your support so much, you have always been one of my biggest fans. Hope you don't stay away too long, I will miss you. John

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/31/2018 11:50:00 AM

Hi John, Thank you so much. I just need a break. I am a huge fan you and your poetry. I shall return my friend:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/31/2018 11:38:00 AM

Hope we don't have to miss you for long, best wishes Alexis...

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/31/2018 11:41:00 AM

Thanks Charlie. I just need a break. I shall return:-) Alexis