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American Freedom, the New World's Blessings

People emigrated from many shores To a New World that had no closed doors American culture’s diversity Thank God we live in the land of the free Asians, Africans, Europeans too Many nationalities did accrue Leaving behind countries with tyranny Thank God we live in the land of the free Troubles erupted among many clans And yet now in peace we stand holding hands A rainbow of blessings, God’s artistry Thank God we live in the land of the free This blend adds richness to the melting pot Thankful for all the liberty we’ve got Each has a place in our society Thank God we live in the land of the free Discrimination sinks into the past Knowing that our strong bonds are sure to last America says, “Welcome” to you and me God’s blessings found in the land of the free *Entry for Dane Ann's contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win Carolyn. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/16/2011 1:52:00 AM

Congratulations, Carolyn on your first place win in my contest. What a pleasant surprise for me to see that one of my dearest friends won first place in a contest that I juged blind! Double joy! Great poem! Love you. Very Happy for You, Dane Ann

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/14/2011 1:46:00 PM

Love your use of this form for the topic! and showing our dream! Congrad's Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/14/2011 8:58:00 AM

Hooray for you Carolyn! I had forgotten about this contest, and now I can see why Dane Ann chose this wonderful poem a winner!! Congratulations on a 'welcoming' inspirational poem!!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/14/2011 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your big win Carolyn. A great poem. I was surprised to find this contest result this morning. Love, Joyce

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/14/2011 8:38:00 AM

Dear Carolyn, This flows so swell.. u make writing a krielle look so easy....Makes me want to go and try to write my first one...I am glad my ancestors immigrated to this great country...we are sooooo blessed. Congrats deary. Congrats. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/14/2011 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Dane, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 6/6/2011 10:28:00 AM

a great piece of creative poetry, a wonderful write about our wonderful country, even with our pitfalls, which our many, we still have our freedom.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 6/4/2011 9:10:00 AM

This is a very patriotic poem. We indeed live in the land of the free and the home of the brave. Many people just don't realize it. They just have to read the news and look around. The grass is not always greener on the other side. Have a great week and thanks for your many comments. Take care and God bless, Jancarl

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2011 6:59:00 AM

Lovely patriotic write, my friend. I don't think I could write anything like that about England... Hope you're having a great day - and plenty of r&r after your voyage. Hope you get the go ahead to have your scans - I guess the NHS is the one thing England still has going for it. Have a great weekend - and enjoy your fish : )

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/3/2011 12:51:00 PM

A great entry as always Carolyn. I see you must be home. hope you got your allotted no. of fish. I am pleased as can be to be one of the first prize winners in your contest. Thanks loads. Love, Joyce

Daver Austin

Date: 6/2/2011 12:30:00 PM

I don't think people appreciate this country till they go to another country and find life much harder in that other country. Hope you are having fun wherever you are dear Carolyn. LOve, daver

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/1/2011 7:45:00 AM

Hey CD! This one is a good Thank you note to our all the people INCLUDING the Indians, who make this a great place to live. We can do better, but we should be grateful. I hope your fishing trip was sAWESOME! I wrote a poem for God. Are you shocked? Also, I posted a few new ones. I think you will like the one about Equal Rights, as well as a few others. ~Joey

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/30/2011 3:20:00 PM

Providence brought all nations together. in a land where all can be better. time has matured us into what we were to be a leader among nations. a place to flee.