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Predator Metaphor

Nestled in the shade A predator on the prowl Settled down to wait for prey to run afoul… Suddenly it dashed Madly from the thicket; Ambushed a prey, in a *flash* And slapped it with a ticket.

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/15/2017 11:26:00 AM

Such a brilliant and fantastic read, well I like this one better,

Hannah Borke
Date: 8/15/2017 11:33:00 AM

Most people can relate

Paul Warren

Date: 8/7/2017 6:39:00 AM

Interesting poem and slant on speed traps. Well done.

Hannah Borke
Date: 8/7/2017 7:03:00 AM

Thanks so much for appreciating this, although I thought you'd remember that I wanted your comment on my poem that included you -- which is "Pocks on Crocs". Please come back and comment on that one.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/28/2017 5:46:00 PM

Aw yes this is a fantastic write! :) xomo Enjoyed!

Hannah Borke
Date: 7/28/2017 5:52:00 PM

Thank you for liking it! I was having doubts.