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Alone-Reverse

She was left alone After the accident In the darkness And strangers cried.. Their secrets were whispered As she listened Through hollow walls The memories came crashing And invading her dreams Haunting all tomorrows Forever.. Reverse Poem Contest 8-12-2013

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Bl Devnath

Date: 8/31/2013 10:50:00 AM

Totally Reverse poem excellently penned.Congrats on your win. Loved always,my friend, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/29/2013 11:37:00 PM

thumbs up on your shining win, donns.. congrats, way to go!..:) huggs

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/29/2013 5:23:00 PM

Oh my Donna...I think I remember you telling me about this...If I had to pick a fav verse, I guess it would be the second...Do you have any idea how much you have grown as a poet since I first started reading your stuff? Mercy me...

Donna Jones
Date: 8/29/2013 9:49:00 PM

Means a lot Tim..thanks....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 11:10:00 AM

Congrats on your great win..One of the better ones..Sara

Donna Jones
Date: 8/29/2013 9:50:00 PM

So sweet Sara...and thanks for the mail:-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2013 9:16:00 AM

Donna, a very nice win.. congratulations... Linda

Donna Jones
Date: 8/29/2013 9:51:00 PM

Thank you Linda....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/28/2013 7:29:00 AM

This one is so sad but so perfectly expressed. Reading it backwards was even more impactful. Congratulations.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/27/2013 8:35:00 PM

Very good, both ways -I like this one very much...I'm adding this to my favorite poem list for sure !!!SNOITALUTARGNOC annoD no ruoy niw LOL!!! MC

Donna Jones
Date: 8/29/2013 6:49:00 PM

UoY knahT.......:-) very kind.....

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/27/2013 6:24:00 PM

Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2013 4:11:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Donna

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2013 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations, Donna ! This one hurts to read it, whether it's up or down, the emotion is the same!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/19/2013 6:33:00 AM

This was very impressive Donne.Hugs for this.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/17/2013 12:24:00 PM

THIS IS AWESOME MD!!!! LOVE IT! You will FLY in the contest! XOXOXOXOXOXO

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/16/2013 1:14:00 PM

Either way........this works beautifully!! Good luck in the contest, Donna....this has a haunting quality !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 9:50:00 AM

I like it Donna, i still don't get the contest... good luck in the contest...Linda

April Gabriella

Date: 8/15/2013 2:29:00 PM

Wonderful! And even more so in reverse. Excellent work!

The Situation

Date: 8/15/2013 12:34:00 AM

Just as good in reverse.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/14/2013 3:00:00 PM

Really cool the way you did this, I don't know if I can get my brain to? LOL Thank you for stopping by and reading my verse. Light & Love

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/14/2013 11:26:00 AM

Shadows cast a haunting picture that secretly surmise. That when the moment has it's way. They suddenly demise. Peace. :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/14/2013 7:01:00 AM

nicely penned Donna...best wishes

Noel Villarosa

Date: 8/13/2013 11:21:00 PM

Donna, you did well on this contest. Either way you still made it clear. Appreciate the time in reading my poem. (^_^) Noel.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/13/2013 10:23:00 PM

GO Win and congratulation for the contest sweet deary Donna...a very nice write :) <3 thank you for every visit <3 Sk

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/13/2013 7:23:00 PM

A good read either way, Donna. I know you will do well in the contest. Good luck, my friend. Licia :-)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/13/2013 4:27:00 PM

Excellent write that reads well both ways...best of luck in the contest.Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2013 3:09:00 PM

donna, don't worry. you did it right. When I first read his contest, I thought he meant us to write it WORD for WORD reversed. I did not realize he meant only to reverse the lines. It should not be so difficult in that case and I ought to try it!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2013 10:21:00 AM

- You always impresses me,Donna ... this is awesome! - Good luck in the contest! - All the best to you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones
Date: 8/13/2013 11:10:00 AM

My, very nice compliment....thank you very much....