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Alone - Solitude and Loneliness

Alone - Solitude and Loneliness Solitude is a state of mind being solid as a rock taking a walk in a country park on a Sunday afternoon alone, deep in the forest but not lonely in touch with the moment reflecting, replenishing being self aware Solitude is something you choose The sun fades into the darkness of night the sky is clear and the full moon shines bright in the distance the lone wolf howls at the moon while the solitary owl perched high up in a tree patiently waiting for it’s prey to appear Loneliness is a state of mind being vulnerable as a child taking a walk on a busy city street on a Saturday afternoon alone, lonely in a crowd-full of people not being aware of the moment isolation, estrangement an exaggerated awareness of being alone Loneliness is imposed on you by others The night give it’s place to the day the sky is clear but the morning fog hides the sun in the distance a lone dog howls for some unknown reason in the park, a pigeon sits on the highest statue waiting for someone to appear Paul E Mazerolle

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Date: 9/14/2018 8:02:00 AM
Paul, awesome poem! I am a songwriter. Do you mind if I use "Alone" for a song?
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Date: 9/15/2018 10:05:00 AM
Fedor Korotchenko I am pleased with your request. Yes you have my permission to use my text Paul E Mazerolle
Date: 12/20/2016 11:16:00 AM
Paula, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/12/2016 10:03:00 AM
Paul, I really like this one. Well done!
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