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Almost As Beautiful

~~~ I now keep the sunrise, every tangerine flowing ribbon and rose petal chiffon whisper, in an old mason jar on my window sill so I can look at its glowing effervescent shimmers of illuminated brilliance every time I can't see your smile it is almost as beautiful...

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/10/2019 9:28:00 AM

...and rose petal chiffon whisper. just so beautiful...it is almost as beautiful...perfect, Chris (the romantic poet) Hugs...Kim

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 9:40:00 AM

Thank you Kim. I am happy you enjoyed my little romantic bottled sunrise

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 3:32:00 AM

Gorgeously done; your writing is so unique.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Caren. That means a lot to me.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/9/2019 9:44:00 PM

Wonderful write Chris just like I like them!

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:14:00 AM

Thanks John, happy I could write one in the style you enjoy

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/9/2019 6:36:00 PM

wow! this is amazing, chris!

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Ilene.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/9/2019 3:49:00 PM

As beautiful as your heart...Awesome

Chris Green
Date: 9/9/2019 3:53:00 PM

As beautiful as you. : ) Thank you so much Charmaine.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/9/2019 2:24:00 PM

A smile like this can pierce the heart as this poem has pierced mine! I loved this poem Chris! : ) xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 9/9/2019 3:09:00 PM

Connie, my friend, thank you for always leaving a smile on my page. I am so happy you liked this one.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2019 2:15:00 PM

Just imagine if we could capture a sunrise and keep it in a jar so we could experience its beauty whenever we want! How I love this poem! It's so nice to have you back, Chris. I come and go as best I can, but it's really great to know you are here again. I thought of you often and prayed for your happiness. Hugs, Carolyn

Chris Green
Date: 9/9/2019 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn, your wonderful thoughts have made my day. I appreciate you and always look forward to your visits. And yes, it would be amazing if we could capture a sunrise in a jar, but as long as we have one in our hearts that will always be a beautiful thing

Hello There

Date: 9/9/2019 1:02:00 PM

I would like to see that smile ~ to think it could be more beautiful than this... Gorgeous piece of poetry here.

Chris Green
Date: 9/9/2019 1:24:00 PM

I would too, at least once more but I don't think that will happen. Thanks so much my friend, I appreciate you stopping by today.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/9/2019 1:02:00 PM

Wow! Chris, You have penned such a beautiful write. I found it to be romantic as well. I wish someone would say to me in this well written piece. Have a wonderful day my friend;-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 9/9/2019 1:24:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this one. I appreciate you Alexis.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/9/2019 12:12:00 PM

Love it Chris. It made me think of my mason jar that was hanging on my porch. Not sure where it is...do you have it? kidding. This is very nice :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/9/2019 12:15:00 PM

I might, let me check. : ) Thank you Heidi

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/9/2019 11:43:00 AM

wow... this is more beautiful than any smile could ever be...the imagery, your choice of wording, the romantic appeal, this is just gorgeous writing my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/9/2019 12:15:00 PM

I don't know, some smiles are very special. : ) Thank you so very much Sandy.