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All the Roses Have Their Thorns, But That's Not Why They'Re Adored

Smell the roses, Smell their air Wonder what sweet sounds they'd share Sounds of summer, sounds of fall, Sounds so sweet, you'd pick them off Tasteful colors, Tasteless thorns A taste of iron in the blood they pour A taste of medicine, for ours they fall For their tasteful colors and vitality do warm A touch of love A touch of fear If roses could touch, how would they feel? Touched, through thorns adorned with a prick of blood Touched, by petals adored but picked for fun

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Date: 1/1/2020 9:20:00 PM
Excellent piece. Hope you are enjoying the soup. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 12/21/2019 10:35:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Helen
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Date: 12/21/2019 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations Helen for your honorable mention place in the smell sound taste touch contest. I liked your unusual form of putting in smell, sense, taste and touch, it made the experience of roses special. Thanks for entering.
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Date: 12/13/2019 1:09:00 AM
Every rose have their thorns.. So do all the sweet people around us.. Keep the thorn away and enjoy the beauty of them..Good one..
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Helen Artery
Date: 12/13/2019 12:06:00 PM
It's almost vain for "roses" to keep up such delicate defenses. I think it detracts from their sweetness, and sometimes it is important to be vulnerable. Thank you for your thought, Jenish
Date: 12/9/2019 3:57:00 AM
Helen, this is a gorgeous tribute to roses, and fun! Welcome to Soup!
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Helen Artery
Date: 12/13/2019 11:50:00 AM
Thank you, Caren! I look forward to being part of the community.

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