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All I Want To be

There’s one guy I want to be
I’ll be me and this is all 
Where I am is good for me
Smile I do, it’s wonderful
Rose it cannot be lily
Me I’m comfy with myself
Those who say they’re above me
Be so very low on wealth
Seems to me joy is success
Though joy is a thing that’s rare
Beams of joy, I seek, no less
So this joy I then can share
Spreading love to other souls
Treading path to make them whole


Rosina Sonnet
Created by Peter duggan
Each line syllables seven
Rhymes both beginning and end
Rhyming theme ababcdcdefefgg

12 October 2016

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Date: 1/10/2019 2:36:00 AM
I love the Rosina Sonnet Peter! I have copied down the pattern so I can try it. Joy is success my friend!
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/10/2019 5:06:00 PM
Hi Caren so nice to see that you are interested in this style. I wrote two sonnet styles for my wife. I rather likr the sonnet style, although I would rather write with a longer style. Good luck with this style, my friend. Thank you for your kind comments....Peter
Date: 1/9/2019 8:33:00 PM
Lovely, Sidney.
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/10/2019 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Line, always so nice to read your kind comments, my friend....pete
Date: 1/9/2019 6:20:00 PM
You bring us much joy with your writing! Beautiful poem. Thank you :)
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sidney dugan
Date: 1/9/2019 6:39:00 PM
G'day Heidi it is me who should thank you for all the lovely comments you write on my simple words. I truly appreciate you, my friend....peter