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white cotton ball clouds

waltzing along deep blue skies-

ill wind steps on toes

 

 

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Poetry notes:
12/19/2018

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white cotton ball clouds waltzing along deep blue skies- ill wind steps on toes

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Date: 12/27/2018 5:37:00 PM
Great work. Enjoyed the picture and the poem. Sara
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Date: 12/25/2018 7:59:00 AM
Love the imagery, good work, Mark!
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Date: 12/25/2018 11:40:00 AM
How nice of you to stop by, Susan. Thank you for your kind encouragement! ~Mark
Date: 12/23/2018 9:49:00 AM
Mark, beautiful, love your haiku, oh that darn wind that spoils everything. We get a lot of wind in my city. Love the music too, well done ~
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Date: 12/23/2018 10:01:00 AM
Lol... I know, right? Thanks, Constance :) ~Mark
Date: 12/23/2018 8:08:00 AM
Awesome personification here!
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Date: 12/23/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! ~Mark
Date: 12/19/2018 4:51:00 PM
That photo truly did look like the poem! Nice write, Mark.
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Date: 12/19/2018 5:45:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! ~Mark
Date: 12/19/2018 4:47:00 PM
Love 'ill wind steps on toes' - I can feel its rush!
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Date: 12/19/2018 5:44:00 PM
Lol... Nothing ruins a nice waltz more than an ill wind stepping on your toes! Thanks for stopping by, Michelle. ~Mark

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