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Ain'T Done Yet

Got a challenge on the go with my dear son Chris! He's currently down to 185 from 228 how great is this Well he's down quite a bit more But I started at 250 a higher score Lost the same but ain't done yet, hear me hiss

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/14/2018 8:30:00 AM

The incredible shrinking Jack/His vim and vigor came back//A few less bites//exciting nights//absolutely no lack! GOOD MORNING JACKOLA!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 8:37:00 AM

Finally made it under 200!!! Hang out hhe flags!!! Hey you're into ye ole limericks... keep on a-keeping on!!! xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/14/2018 7:34:00 AM

Some healthy competition! Way to go guys! Good morning dear Jack! xomo :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 7:38:00 AM

Hey sweetness! Feeling fantastic these days!!!! Thanks for your encouragement... love ya!!! xxx

Silent One

Date: 1/14/2018 7:00:00 AM

I am so sorry to hear that.. I hope he pulls through.

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 7:10:00 AM

LOL

Silent One

Date: 1/14/2018 6:36:00 AM

I don't get it lol... Chris? What has he done?

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 6:44:00 AM

Oh forgot to tell you, he's in a coma!!!!! LOL