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Ah, Bite Me

Get out of bed and just get it in gear. Don’t give me excuses; I don’t want to hear. Now follow my rules, you’re doing it wrong! You wrote me a poem but I asked for a song. I think you are deaf, cause you can’t be that dumb. You say “treat me better”, so prove you’re not scum! You’re lucky to have me, nobody else would put up with your bull-crap, I treat you so good. He kept on and kept on he thought she would break but as he would learn he’d gave more than she’d take. Next night when he came home, she’d set herself free. On the mirror in lipstick she'd scrawled, “Ah, Bite Me!!” 05/31/15 Submission for Bite Me!! Hosted by John Lawless

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Date: 6/12/2015 12:26:00 AM
Nice win.... LINDA
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:07:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Preston! Great write!
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations on the win a 7 Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/11/2015 6:13:00 PM
Hi Preston: Beautiful poem and beautiful payback in the end.
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Date: 6/11/2015 3:33:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 6/11/2015 3:31:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Preston:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2015 3:19:00 PM
This is an interesting and fun read with a happy ending. I kinda felt like cheering when I read the last two lines. Well done and thanks for playing the contest game.
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Date: 6/12/2015 4:19:00 PM
Thank you John for hosting, and of course, for the high marks. That was a fun theme.
Date: 6/1/2015 10:58:00 PM
LOL, She's sounds a bit like me... :) good luck
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Date: 6/1/2015 12:43:00 AM
Great fun and imaginative... Good luck in the contest, Preston.
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Date: 5/31/2015 5:56:00 PM
love the sting in the tail at the end Preston - great pen - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs JAN XX
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