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Ageless

She wouldn't tell us of her age. She'd say it's just a number. To look at her with every thought was when and where she'd slumber. That when she'd go to smile at us her comfort made us feel- like all that health about her was meant for death to steal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/28/2018 2:49:00 PM
You captured the beauty of her smile, Trevor. Death will be the last of our enemies to leave us...but even death witll go.
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Trevor Mcleod
Date: 3/7/2018 10:48:00 AM
Thanks R.A.P. -Yes; death can go. Trevor

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