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Adore You Baby

Adore you baby Innocent face in memories adore, First look my sweet angel settled at you, Soft touch of cotton, my newborn baby, When I was in bed, in cradle were you, Then subtly closer a kangarooed baby, A lifetime to cherish, I will adore, Warm and content, lay my asleep baby, Waking up with a precious smile to adore, A blessing from heaven, my dear it's you! Past or today, I adore you baby ! Written on 26/7/14 Contest- Tritina challenge Sponsor- Craig Cornish

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Date: 7/26/2014 11:37:00 AM
Dr. Upma This is a sweet and charming write with feelings from your heart that flows. Thank you for the great comment on my Enlighten poem.
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Date: 7/26/2014 10:59:00 AM
This is very sweet and the kangarooed line is quite interesting! Adore you baby, what a nice way to do your title and theme!!
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Date: 7/26/2014 9:16:00 AM
Great job with very difficult form. I loved the "kangarooed baby" reference. This should be atop the list IM(not so)HO.
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Date: 7/26/2014 8:53:00 AM
aww! sweet girl!! hugs
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Date: 7/26/2014 7:50:00 AM
Aww...how wonderful...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/26/2014 7:17:00 AM
Awww! So sweet! Well done, dear Upma.. Gl in the contest.. Hugs.. Arlene
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