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About , Those Angel Eyes

About , Those Angel Eyes Silently basking in your soft and gentle light living deep within your natural glow Your precious lips tell all a man needs to know as heaven you cast into the starlight night That night across the room I first saw those loving eyes there hope cast into my soul winning your hand and heart Thoughts of bliss and life that should never see us part I swore an oath to win you should it take a thousand tries By your loving side, softly resting in your gentle shade stars faded to your light as the moon sought your love Angels dancing in rhythm singing glory from far above pale against steamy nights and the hot love we made Your soul and spirit were to seed my desperate cries for your loving kisses and touch to ever so die for Love sent me play for , yes to even beg much more for paradise resting in the light of those angel eyes Robert L. 05-08-2014

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Date: 11/11/2016 11:53:00 AM
Robert, please don't take this the wrong way, but I think this poem is mislabeled. It should be an Enclosed Rhyme form, I do believe. I'm just learning all the poem forms, which is why I'm so attracted to this site. But it would help other readers know what a particular form should look like. This was a very good Enclosed Rhyme poem. Much love from the Romantic Warrior (RW.)
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Date: 11/11/2016 11:48:00 AM
A beautiful romantic poem, Robert. I've seen many of your thoughtful comments to others, and was intrigued. Saw what an extensive catalog and asked myself where to start. Well, I went back to your first poem posted (I think.) Just from glancing at some of the poem titles, you seem to have a very romantic nature and inclination. I love that about you already before even reading your poems. You've got a fan, my friend. Will read more in due time. Much love and peace to you and yours. RW
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Date: 5/8/2014 11:33:00 PM
A lovely poem.. I think u wrote this for ur love...... Lovely...best wishes-shaista:)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/9/2014 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, yes it was for a great love I lost in my youth. One of the follies of youth and wild ways!
Date: 5/8/2014 10:02:00 PM
Another stunning one to add, Robert. Excellent poem! Totally enjoyed this evening. Annalise
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/9/2014 6:09:00 AM
Thanks for commenting my friend.. From the heart writing is easy and even when it has a sad ending its great to get it out.
Date: 5/8/2014 9:45:00 PM
OHHH Robert.. this is so beautiful... My heart cries out for you... we all do stupid things when we are young don't we ???? and regret later???? this is beautifully written .. a true artist you are hugs Brooke
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/9/2014 6:08:00 AM
Thanks my friend. I seem to have done far more than my share! Looking back at the joys and the sorrows I find more joys but some very deep sorrows
Date: 5/8/2014 9:17:00 PM
Written about a lady I almost married but being too young , too wild and too stupid I let her slip way! No greater mistake hath a mortal man ever made!!
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