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Abagail's Ballet

ineffable grace flows free so comely her spirit dance with auburn hair, cheeks of red I marvel in awe....

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2011 11:52:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rick, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2011 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations on the success of this sweetie poem! Luv,. Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/4/2011 5:17:00 PM

Very nicely done and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/4/2011 2:59:00 PM

Hi Rick - Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kash Poet

Date: 2/4/2011 1:06:00 PM

Congrats ^Rick on your big win in this contest of Francine!Enjoyed your poem---kashinath

James Fraser

Date: 2/4/2011 10:54:00 AM

A delight to read Rick, lovely Dodoitsu. Many congrats on your win in Francine's contest....:)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/4/2011 10:21:00 AM

Good Morning Rick, Such a lovely Dodoitsu you have penned here. Congratulations on your win, your words are just beautiful. As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 10:00:00 AM

Another big win for you today, Rick! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2011 8:08:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your big win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem..luv..

John Freeman

Date: 2/4/2011 6:15:00 AM

Great to see you at the top, Rick. Interesting, how you got the word "Red" in there. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/4/2011 1:34:00 AM

a aloso marvel in awe, rick! cheers for the great win! :) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/3/2011 11:29:00 PM

just beautiful Rick, totally different than the rest of the entries , congrats on your third place win in my contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2011 6:28:00 PM

this is beautiful, Rick. Small question at soupmail.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/1/2011 5:21:00 PM

Ahhh...this is a beauty....!! Just lovely Rick!! If this is for the contest....a real winner it will be! (and thanks so much for my 7th place in your last contest....I look forward to your next! :) love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2011 4:20:00 PM

Reads like the winning Dodoitsu to me..I am so glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2011 3:23:00 PM

Such a lovely image of this beautiful girl, Rick. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 2/1/2011 2:47:00 PM

She sounds like an angel, Rick. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/1/2011 2:24:00 PM

A dodoitsu well written. Have you ever met anyone like Abagail before?

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/1/2011 2:09:00 PM

nice pen picture of auburn hair and ckeeks of red, Rick