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Aaj Khush Hoon Mein

( This one is HINDI version written with english alphabets.) Aaj Khush Hoon Mein- khush hoon mein- khush hoon mein; Aaj khush hoon mein, alfaj nahin batane ko; Mand muskan hai chayi, na pta chale is zamane ko; Hua hai zikr unka, do pal mangte the bitane ko; Didaar na hi sahi, kuch yaadein hain doob jane ko; Aaj fir bheed hai umdi, unke rooh bhare najrane ko; Qatar mein hain hum bhi, unki bas-ek zhalak pane ko; Yad hain vo pal, vo pehli thi mulakat; Kaamp rahe the hath, par dil mein the jajbaat; Khil- khila rahe the vo, jaise bin badal barsat; Koshish thi poori, na keh sake vo baat; Keh to hum dete, par kuch aise the hallat; Darte the bas itna, na milne ki na lein saugat; Mauke bahut talashe, kuch dale saajish mein do hath; Bas hojayen unse rubroo, nahi chahiye thi kaynat; Yuhin beet gayi vo ghadiyan, vo din or vo raat; Gardish mein the taare, aur hathon mein the hath; Achanak-Achanak hui gad-gadahat, roshni thi chuh Jane ko; Nikla jab mein bahar, kismat pakdi khadi sirahne ko; Suraj ki kirane-baarish ki boonden thi tim-timane ko; Mano keh rahi ho dekh le, mein laayi tere nazrane ko; Hua hai fir didar unka kya kahoon, kuch-bahoot kuch hai jatane ko; Aafreen-aafreen-aafreen; Jaagi ye dil mein rangat, chahoon cheekh Jane ko; Dar hain vo mere aaye, la rakhoon poore jamane ko; Bande ne ki khatir, baarish thi chook Jane ko; Nikal gayi vo haste, deke naya mode paimane ko; Yaaron mehfil hai aaj saji, bhar do poore mehkhane ko; Bakshi hai tune ye rehmat, nahin mere pas kuch chukane ko; Shiddat se kia deedar unka, chah nahin kuch or paane ko; Ae malik- Ae malik mitade mere aksh ko; Ji loon mein ji bhar ke, swapan is suhane ko. TO LISTEN TO PROSE visit : http://atulthakurvlsithap.wixsite.com/atulphotography/poem-6-1 Motivation : Interacted with someone after long time, putting the reason of birthday behind. Moment: Meanwhile sleeping, a thought into the mind-crushing the pillow while blushing behind.

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Date: 11/13/2016 2:30:00 PM
Loved the poem u wrote.. Emotions were so real. Well written.. Keep on writing. :)
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Atul Thakur
Date: 11/27/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thanks .. :)
Date: 10/1/2016 1:07:00 PM
Wow! so much emotions flowing...haqueekat ya real swapna hein? (understand but not very fluent with Hindi)Well penned friend :)
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Atul Thakur
Date: 10/2/2016 5:11:00 PM
thanks.... and yes it was real-very real.
Date: 9/21/2016 6:38:00 PM
Nice nd sweet written :)
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Atul Thakur
Date: 9/24/2016 5:30:00 AM
thank you so much.... i read your poem 'Maa" ,, really nice way of expressing your thoughts,feeling and emotions. Hope will listen more from you. God Bless.
Date: 9/7/2016 1:53:00 PM
TO LISTEN TO PROSE , OKAY... ATUL, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/31/2016 1:09:00 AM
Atul Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Atul Thakur
Date: 9/24/2016 5:20:00 AM
thanks.....