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'a Year From Now'

I hope my voice stir you in that place where you barricade all that is you I hope that my touch might awaken the parts of you left dormant I hope that the moments in my presence means that we are creating memories I hope that in a year from now you will remember my voice I hope that in a year from now you will remember my touch I hope that in a year from now we will still be making memories ©040820150415

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/11/2015 9:16:00 PM

This is a very hopeful piece.

James Fraser

Date: 8/6/2015 2:02:00 PM

Love this poem Wilma, and I sure hope it's I that will be making memories a year from now. Blessed weekend ahead to you, hugs//James xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2015 8:15:00 PM

I love how you let us know in the last line that you are together in that moment and hopefully you WILL be making more memories a year from now!!

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/5/2015 2:34:00 PM

The repetitive use of the phrase "I Hope", strengthens the message of this poem and captures the anxiety of being in doubt as a nagging unresolved feeling. This use of repetition is successful in this application and sets the mood for this poem. Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 8/5/2015 10:58:00 AM

Wilma, deep and emotional and a beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my sunset poem

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/4/2015 1:49:00 PM

- We always create new memory .... a beautiful poem dear Wilma - I really enjoy reading it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Samiha Zubair

Date: 8/4/2015 9:35:00 AM

Its good , when even in few words u can express something deep