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A World Without You

A world without you means I cannot see your sweet sweet smile or beautiful brown eyes fixated with such happiness on me as if I were, for you, a precious prize. It means I cannot touch your gorgeous face or let my fingers linger on your cheek as leaning into you, I start to trace your honeyed mouth, which does not need to speak, for all I want to do is kiss those lips with lusciously deliberate delight as twilight's sun behind the mountain slips and I am left with holding you all night! I know a world without you means all this because for years now, I've not known such bliss. May 29, 2020 for JCB Burl's "A World Without You" Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:08:00 PM
Very Romantic and Warm! Beautifully penned! Best wishes :) SK
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Date: 6/9/2020 11:40:00 AM
As you say I'm the (king) of sad poems. YOU, are the Queen of these dreamy romantic poems. <3 :)
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Date: 6/6/2020 6:55:00 PM
I am glad that you knew such love and hold it still within. Congrats on your win and the expressions that you wrote.
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Date: 6/6/2020 2:40:00 AM
World class all the way. Makes me embarrassed for myself. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/1/2020 3:56:00 PM
Wow! I love the way you have used such soothing imagery with emotions and in a sonnet! Congratulations on your win Andrea :)
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Date: 6/1/2020 8:43:00 AM
Gorgeous sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Elaine
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Date: 5/31/2020 5:48:00 PM
Reading your poem just now, I had that, Ah, moment. Lovely Poem Andrea. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 5/31/2020 1:54:00 PM
A nice romantic write. a win so congrats to you. love phyl
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Date: 5/31/2020 12:31:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/31/2020 5:08:00 AM
Very nice...I like it...
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Date: 5/30/2020 7:54:00 PM
Just love this. I'm sure it's going to win. Love and prayers for you with blessings too... Gina
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Date: 5/30/2020 4:05:00 PM
Well done Andrea enjoyed this one very much, now I hope you write on for my sonnet contest, you do them so well!
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Date: 5/30/2020 3:49:00 PM
Every emotion you touch in your splendid verse, Andrea. Your words give special meaning to a loss--so well depicted!
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Date: 5/30/2020 2:10:00 PM
My wife passed 5 years ago, but I recently walked down a lane and heard her scream at me, "Pick that up!", looked down and saw a typically Welsh love-knot sterling ring, so your love may be closer to you than you think! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/30/2020 10:54:00 AM
A level of intimacy that we all strive to achieve. Beautifully written Andrea. Nice way to start the day...
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Date: 5/30/2020 9:06:00 AM
You make one feel the deep longing within this sonnet, Andrea, nicely penned. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/30/2020 8:45:00 AM
Beautifully penned and heartfelt. A sure winner.
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Date: 5/30/2020 6:53:00 AM
Gorgeous sonnet my friend; so well penned. No surprise there.
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Date: 5/30/2020 1:30:00 AM
An excellent sonnet to the 'one who got away'. The feelings never go away, though. Captivating... best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 5/30/2020 12:57:00 AM
How does this make me feel, about you dearest poet, your poetic expression cover eons of subjects and sentiments, each so striking in there own way, a multitude of talented words that spread around the globe, to be absorbed by so many poetic minds.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/30/2020 1:19:00 PM
thanks, both of your, dear poets and friends.
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John Watt
Date: 5/30/2020 1:26:00 AM
Well stated, Harry.
Date: 5/29/2020 10:13:00 PM
Well said, Andrea, the world without your loved one is hard to cope. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/29/2020 8:18:00 PM
Hard to imagine being apart Andrea, we must live in the now and never take anything for granted. Good luck Tom
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