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A Winter Sedoka

January’s sun glows on the new-fallen snow which blankets a large mountain the mountain's peak is a luminous cathedral with sun as its spire January 10, 2023 for Brian Strand's the 'CONTEST NO 1180' Poetry Contest

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Ann Peck

Date: 1/26/2023 11:16:00 AM

Lovely Sedoka, Andrea. I love the mountain/cathedral metaphor! Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:16:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/25/2023 7:34:00 PM

just wonderfully penned; stupendous; great to read

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/25/2023 6:22:00 PM

Lovely metaphors, Andrea. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/25/2023 2:48:00 PM

I enjoyed the dazzling images evoked in this splendid poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/25/2023 8:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write. Have a wonderful day..............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/25/2023 7:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrea! :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 5:52:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Andrea. I can see the snow-covered mountains clearly :) Lovely write! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs Charlie

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2023 2:32:00 PM

Very evocative of the majesty of a snow covered mountain, best of luck for the contest~

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/13/2023 1:36:00 AM

Simply superb. Best wishes Panagiota

Valsa George

Date: 1/12/2023 4:11:00 AM

Love the 'cathedral' image ! Beautiful Sedoka, dear Andrea. All the Best !

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/11/2023 7:23:00 AM

Glowing imagery, Andrea:)

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2023 6:27:00 AM

Andrea, you have done a wonderful job writing this. The beauty of the night sky outside, combined with the warm glow of the snow glow is just breathtaking

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/11/2023 5:51:00 AM

I like the metaphor you used in the second stanza, Andrea. Beautiful descriptions.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2023 1:58:00 AM

Excellent imagery. Well done.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 1/11/2023 1:06:00 AM

Lovely build-up to "the sun as its spire!" Elizabeth