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A Weird Asian Man

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I had a dream- I was in an old Chinese place, a restaurant and the waiter had a wrinkled face; he was Asian and he looked upset so I looked away. Outside the windows everything looked drab and gray, when I looked back Asian man was gone without a trace; I went to the cash and he popped up so I could pay. I asked him for directions to a hotel close by, for the night- but I have no idea why; he wrote some scribbles on a paper and disappeared. I would have been scared but this was just a dream weird, stepping outside the moon was high in the sky; I looked at the guide of directions and feared . . . that I would never find my destination tonight, wait- why do I need a hotel when I have a bed, right; and this is just a strange of dream of asking for direction. So confused- I need to wake and do some reflection, then, I am awake in my bed holding a paper of white; "right for heaven, left for hell"- written in English perfection. ________________________ July 15, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/A Weird Asian Man Copyright Protected, ID 18-1042-192-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 7/18/2018 8:51:00 AM
Somehow my direction pointed me to this excellent write, Constance! Very well done...best of luck in the contest...Charlie
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Date: 7/15/2018 5:10:00 PM
Oooooh, oooh, oooh, suspenseful music playing! Really enjoyed it!
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