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A Vision of Existence - Baby Style

"A Vision of Existence - Baby Style" my eyes blink within a cushioned comfort zone fingers and toes cling to tender warm insides I tend to dream of bicycles when I birth flesh and bone or a pink doll house where a loving family abides. my swimming skills are limited as I lay in Mommy's womb one day I'll jump the high dive at the beach in a few months I'll push my way out of this vacuumed tomb to taste sweet fruits; my favorite will be peach. I dream of running round a baseball field on a sunny day or jumping rope or riding skates with friends sometimes, I wonder, how Mommy will hold me in her special way how Daddy will teach me great things where learning never ends. I know I'll have a nursery room with toys and books and games in the corner an awesome truck with cool fender am sure my parents are hard at work browsing baby names but I will have the last surprise revealing to them, my gender. *For Unborn Baby Dream by The Scribe

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Date: 3/13/2014 2:51:00 AM
beautiful poem.... SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2012 12:26:00 AM
A big hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Linda-Marie! This is really great and I love it! love and hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/16/2012 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2012 12:02:00 PM
Many congrats Linda-Marie on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:14:00 AM
Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Linda-Marie. Lovely write!! Hugs! **Maria**
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:50:00 PM
Nicely done. congratulations on your win. lee
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:33:00 PM
HELLO, LINDA MY BFF, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD
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Date: 10/14/2012 5:52:00 PM
congrats on your win with this wonderful write Linda
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Date: 10/14/2012 3:52:00 PM
WON 2ND PLACE .. THANKXXX
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Date: 10/1/2012 3:49:00 AM
Another title-poem! It inspires me for today's posting - if I am patient enough. Anyway, I already had my dream journey into the past, reading your great work: I used to call may daughter "La peach", when she was a new born baby. Souvenirs..Thank you! Love, Hanitra
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:46:00 AM
Sweet imagination of baby style wonderfully done. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/29/2012 12:42:00 PM
LOL, had a chuckle at the last line - little Eric sure did that. Love this sweet write, Linda-Marie
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Date: 9/28/2012 4:09:00 PM
this is just charming! good luck in the contest - this sounds like a winner to me!
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Date: 9/28/2012 2:14:00 PM
What a lovely poem for Scribe. Sure to be a hit, my friend. Joe is walking in here at any moment from being gone to SLC. I am scrambling. hahaha. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/28/2012 6:40:00 AM
Oh wow, I love this very special write my friend! I especially liked the part where you brought up the surprise they will have when the baby reveals his/her gender! This is a wonderful dream to have as a baby...I wonder if I dreamed anything like this, probably not, I probably just dreamed of food or something like that! I really enjoyed this fully delightful poem, I love it! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/27/2012 10:48:00 PM
Such a beauty Linda. This makes me want to be a baby again.
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Date: 9/27/2012 10:00:00 PM
WITH OUR NEW LITTLE BABY IN HOME NOW LOOKING AT HIS FACE TRYING TO IMAGINE HIS DREAMS .. THOUGH HE WAS TO BE A GIRL WE R SO HAPPY FOR THIS BOY ,, SO I WROTE THE POEM WITH TWO GENDERS IN MIND .. ENJOY WITH LUV ..
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