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A Tune of Hope

The band begins, and puppets in tangled strings start to dance. Its rhythm is hypnotic, and all seems fine at first glance. They all dip and whirl as one, keeping in sync with the beat. But I can't follow their lead, it's like I've got two left feet. Their compulsory moves cannot accommodate all. But if you can't dance to them, you are escorted from the ball. My music sounds different, floating above their clamor. For it's tethered to my heart, not tied to wealth or glamor. I perceive a tune of hope in its original form. And it's invigorating; taking me beyond the norm. (Quatrain) 3/4/2015

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:42:00 PM
Great poem, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/5/2015 4:05:00 AM
the parallel way you describe two things yet it is flowing with hope and wisdom!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/5/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Olive, your visits always cheer me up. Emile.
Date: 3/4/2015 7:05:00 PM
Emile, I think I hear the same drummer. This is very well put.
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Date: 3/5/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Jerry, I appreciate your thoughts. Emile.
Date: 3/4/2015 4:35:00 PM
Emile, we must all dance to our own music, well done and thanks so much for visiting my poetry today . . .
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Date: 3/5/2015 9:18:00 AM
As always your visits are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 3/4/2015 2:04:00 PM
a splendid way to interpret the song of hope , emile... spill ink!.. huggs
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:56:00 PM
Thank you very much Nette, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.
Date: 3/4/2015 10:45:00 AM
Excellent pen Emile! I truly enjoyed your tune of hope, fantastic imagery, my dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a lovely day! In his light! God bless! :) D.
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:57:00 PM
Thanks Dorian, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.
Date: 3/4/2015 10:14:00 AM
Delightful write, of a simple tune of hope, a 7 Blessings dear friend
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.
Date: 3/4/2015 9:31:00 AM
Superb....Loved this piece.
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Date: 3/4/2015 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I appreciate it. Emile.

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