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A True Love

The sun shone upon him As he wished all day long Thought odds were grim Still he'd sing that song He lost his faith in all Still held on to some hope One day love would call He'd find a way to cope Held onto all his sorrow Refused to let it go He never had to borrow A love for him did grow She sent it each twilight Upon the gentle breeze Days it shown so bright She sent it with an ease Asking nothing in return Wished only to lift his heart Became her one concern True love to be a part

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/15/2019 8:19:00 AM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Brenda! Janice
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/15/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you Janice! Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/14/2019 10:49:00 AM
I did not know you had been awarded first place, Brenda...not until this moment that is --very well done you! This enchanting little poem is worthy of the accolade!! Lots of fond wishes. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/14/2019 10:52:00 AM
Lol john a who won got first place! But thank you! Lol! Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/14/2019 7:24:00 AM
Congrats Brenda on your first place win..a beautiful poem..so well deserved!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/14/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/14/2019 6:52:00 AM
A very sweet poem, congratulations on your win Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/14/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thanks so much!;) Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/14/2019 6:03:00 AM
A lovely poem Brenda, congrats. :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/14/2019 6:19:00 AM
Gary thank you! Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/14/2019 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Brenda :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/14/2019 6:19:00 AM
Thanks Heidi and congrats to you too! Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/12/2019 9:56:00 AM
Another eloquent write, Brenda...beautifully espoused. With my fondest regards! :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/13/2019 6:19:00 AM
Ah thank you John! You are forever so good to me!;) All my affection Brenda
Date: 1/12/2019 7:23:00 AM
Nicely written, Perhaps true love is just a myth. John
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/13/2019 6:18:00 AM
Lol I'm begin to think maybe lol! Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/11/2019 11:48:00 PM
ah true love.... if only....... beautiful poem.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2019 1:25:00 AM
Lol yea exactly"if only" well gotta write about it since its not a real thing! Lol! Ya know how it is to hope well I guess I do anyway! Bug I wouldn't have any of my poems if I wrote about what I know best! Thanks Art! Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/11/2019 11:42:00 AM
Another great one my friend!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2019 1:23:00 AM
Thanks Bobby!;) Hugs Brenda
Date: 1/11/2019 7:00:00 AM
Beautiful and touching and a testament to true friendship is found in your wonderful words this morning. This was gorgeous my sweet friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/11/2019 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Chris! You are too kind but yes to a true friendship! Hugs Brenda