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I Died a Little Inside

I died a little inside when your mind faded away; feeling completely useless, I sometimes broke down and cried, my tongue numb; I failed to find encouraging words to say. I died a little inside. I recall when you proposed asking me to be your bride and how I said yes on that phantasmagorical day, but Alzheimer's erased that past; now, memories collide. For a moment, you couldn't remember my name yesterday, and ashamedly, I wanted to run away and hide when you asked me why I would want to visit you this way. I died a little inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/11/2019 11:06:00 AM
We are losing a friend of ours to Alzheimer's, so, this touches a personal nerve. So sad, that they don't seem to know what is happening and yet, there are those 'awake' moments, when they hurt so much. How perfectly and poignantly you have captured the feelings. Beautiful write! Thank You!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/11/2019 11:51:00 AM
Thanks you so much Andrew, my condolences my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/10/2019 11:50:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Emile :) - Have a lovely new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/11/2019 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/10/2019 4:13:00 PM
Sad that people have to go through this, a clever take on the contest... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2019 5:56:00 PM
Thanks Silent One, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/9/2019 8:40:00 PM
A poignant poem, Emile. Very touching.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2019 5:56:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2019 10:40:00 AM
Sadly, you have nailed "alzheimers" and the tragedy of it in this darling poem, my friend. It is the saddest thing to see. So very very sad.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/8/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thanks Caren, life is often cruel and sad my friend, we rely on hope to offset reality, Emile.

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