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A Three Alarm Cry!

Hot, hot, hot, am I like the castanet’s of a flamingo dancer! Confining me basted, laced, wrapping me how dare you! I will singe you raw. Curl the hairs in your nose. roll back the edges of your life. Let me go and gentle be the rosy light of candle let me go and cheery cheeks I’ll make on children from Nod. Hot, hot, hot, am I the truck that gave me my name it’s betraying hose defies my flame Peel back the paper sheath of my dismay! Scrawl!!! scribble!!! melt and dribble me Fire Engine red am I and freed I will be! Bull baiter red, bloodshot red Fire Engine red colors the bloody and blushing world. Get your cray on!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/25/2010 12:24:00 AM
this is cute in a way. Keep that fire red engine ready in you, along with a positive attitude.i like it.. and i had a lot of tabs open on my browser of different poets, so i could read their poems, sorry for the wrong comment.thanks for letting me know...awesome write you have here. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/15/2010 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2010 3:24:00 PM
good one Deborah Congrats on the win
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Date: 4/9/2010 6:02:00 PM
Wow, I can see how this was in the winner's circle Deb. I think it is great! Congratulations! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 4/9/2010 1:31:00 PM
loving the poem its really awesome.also ty for ur message on my poem xx
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Date: 4/8/2010 7:20:00 AM
Red hot you are with this one. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 4/8/2010 12:21:00 AM
Lots of pace here ,Debbie.Congrats & Thank you for your kind words today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/7/2010 11:56:00 PM
Congrats on the win. Well penned poen
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations Deborah. Brilliant bright with no holds barred. The thought of curling hairs in the nose makes my toes curl. :) :) well done...Margaret
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Date: 4/7/2010 5:56:00 PM
Your three alarm Hot, hot, and hotter caught fire Deb. "CONGRATULATIONS" Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/7/2010 2:41:00 PM
Deborah , many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest > kool poem >> James
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Date: 4/7/2010 2:27:00 PM
I LOVE THIS !!! That last line, simply sensational!!! Once again...you win me over with your unique take on every contest! Congrats Debbie!!!
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Date: 4/7/2010 2:09:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your 4th place win in my contest... extraordinary poem and my favorite color too.. well deserved win and thankxxx for your supporting my contest..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/7/2010 10:24:00 AM
A PLEASURE T READ.
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Date: 4/7/2010 9:37:00 AM
One hot Mama!!! Sounds like a winner, Deborah!! Good luck...oh, you don't need "good luck" 'cause this rocks!! Peace, Audrey
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