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Fading Summer

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through thick fog tall ship in silence gliding autumn on its coattails AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on November 5, 2018

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Date: 11/6/2018 7:43:00 PM

I love it! Especially" gliding through the fog"!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 7:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Date: 11/6/2018 6:17:00 PM

a gorgeous image on the end of this one!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 6:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Date: 11/6/2018 5:56:00 PM

Love the imagery painted by your wonderful words Line. Autumn follows close. A fave. Have a wonderful Tuesday. your friend....Mike.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 6:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vladislav, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Date: 11/6/2018 1:14:00 PM

I like these coattails the best! (So much better than the political ones).

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 2:59:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Date: 11/6/2018 10:36:00 AM

Great imagery here in a short Haiku; well done.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 2:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.

Date: 11/6/2018 8:13:00 AM

You've painted a majestic picture here, Line. Lovely! ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 3:00:00 PM

Thank you very much, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Date: 11/6/2018 4:26:00 AM

tearing the vast chest of foggy smoke the tower bridge of ship is coming as the wings of shark......

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 4:44:00 AM

This is what I love about these short forms, the reader fills in the blanks and sometimes the result is a 3-D motion picture.