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A Tale of Creation Pt 2 Beta

Part Two (beta) 1. As the aeons, uncounted, unmeasured, transpired, the Lord of hosts immortal vied to bring to the fore, true denizens of life, with the power to choose between love, and strife. 2. As yet, only goodness unchallenged existed. And so on, the heavenly host persisted. But into the static paragon of heaven, God placed one flaw, one imperfection. 3. Seeing this, the heavenly host decried; "Look here! This is all we have been denied!" And some stole away to this place, in heaven, devoid of eternal grace. 4. Bitterness and jealousy soon took root; darkness was light; lies were truth. This place became the opposite of heaven perfection inverted, malice, unfettered. 5. Now God, knowing how this would all come about, prepared, for he had a plan to set out. For you see, it were necessary for beings of light to choose darkness, and distinguish wrong from right. 6. The foundation of his plan now implemented, he set about explaining to the hosts, his intention. "I will now make man and set him an home of earth and water and sky for a dome, to sustain and protect him, from the abyss where no mortal life, or its love, could exist. 7. A vast array of mortal life God then proceeded to design. From the lowest and simple, to divinely complex, God formed from the elements all which exists. 8. Life, as a mirror, reflected all parts of heaven; all it's flaws; all it's perfections. And for every form of life there is, in God's mind, an idea through which it binds life to the eternal, ....... to be continued

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Date: 10/4/2012 12:46:00 PM
So Deity can be a 'rebel rouser', hungry for Himself/Herself - anticipating more inspiration from you Josh - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:49:00 PM
Josh, a very interesting story. enjoyed :-) always *sweet PD
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Date: 10/1/2012 1:36:00 AM
thank you for sharing looking forward to tomorrow
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