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A Tale About Your Death

The Tale of Your Best On the road to our favorite destination, blistering Tennessee heat with sweat pouring down my back- It should have been us on this vacation, me and you- like we used to do. My heart fills with devastation. At a truck stop in downtown Nashville, a teardrop falls without warning. A fond memory turned into mourning- I held my journal and pencil and remembered your pain, how you died in vain, that chilly December morning. I remember the heat as I was trying to write I remember the defeat of your losing fight- Another tale about your death ...was born again. March 13, 2017

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Date: 5/8/2017 7:28:00 AM
With heartfelt detail! Congrats, my friend!
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Date: 4/8/2017 4:47:00 AM
Very deep and emotional.... Congrats Laura, for having your poem placed in the contest.
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Date: 4/4/2017 9:23:00 PM
You describe the day and feelings very well, luloo. I remember the teardrop poem, and am glad to read it once again.
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Date: 3/15/2017 2:32:00 PM
A good read requiring the reader to feel their way through the emotions released by your words. Emile.
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