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A Summer's Day

A sunny day, the sky was blue; the sea was of the same shade too. The flag was flapping in the breeze, the only sound, save gulls, and bees collecting pollen from the flowers. I sat and dreamed, content for hours. And seated by the castle keep, relaxed, they drank, their dogs asleep, and gazed at islands far below, the couple I shall never know. for Brian's contest

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Date: 2/25/2021 5:52:00 AM
The excellent imagery has certainly left its desired effect, Jack, and the ending is superb. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/24/2021 10:12:00 AM
Great win Jack. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/24/2021 7:21:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jack. Janice
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Date: 2/24/2021 6:14:00 AM
So nice...Congrats on your win Jack :)
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Date: 2/23/2021 2:45:00 PM
Ahh!! This one has undertones that captivate. Enjoyed reading. I, also wonder who the couple were. Thanks for all the visits to my poems and taking time to leave nice comments. Sara
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Date: 2/23/2021 1:14:00 PM
Sounds like they were in love!
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Date: 2/23/2021 1:01:00 PM
There's nothing like a trip to the seashore to evoke memories, Jack. Love the way you let your mind wander. Best wishes for a win in Brian's contest! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 2/23/2021 9:27:00 AM
what a charming scene you set jack, cant wait for spring let alone summer:-) hugs jan xx
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