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A Summer Reverie

As I close my eyes in a reverie a beautiful woman suddenly appears; she offers her hand as she comes to me, and urges me to forget my fears. Her red cotton dress flutters in the breeze as it drapes her body, I can see her silhouette; her pleasant demeanor puts my mind at ease; such a beautiful woman I won’t soon forget. With a wink and a smile and a yellow rose she nods her head inviting me to pursue; down a dark path which she only knows for reasons leaving my mind to construe. The path was narrow having many turns, and lined with thick foliage along the way; steps taken with care as one quickly learns, and neither of us had too much to say. At the end of the path a sight you couldn’t miss; a blanket on the ground and a bottle of red. The moments that followed were full of bliss; leaving thoughts of romance dancing in my head. But suddenly without warning she walks away; leaving me to wonder if it was all a guise. She left behind her yellow rose to stay, and my reverie ends as I open my eyes. June 17, 2018

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Date: 6/20/2018 8:51:00 AM
Oh, yes, many a reverie has come to such an abrupt unsatifsfying end!! I really enjoyed this lucsious poem, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/20/2018 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed my reverie. Most of my day dreams come to an abrupt unfinished end, usually interrupted by the realities of life. John
Date: 6/17/2018 11:58:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this lovely summer reverie! Excellently written with beautiful imagery! Hugs. Pandita
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/17/2018 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pandita, I'm glad you enjoyed my little daydream. John
Date: 6/17/2018 9:23:00 AM
beautifully written, john!
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/17/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene, I appreciate it. John

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