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A Special Someone
I awoke and saw your beautiful face Had no fear, I knew why you had appeared.
I held your hand as your heart slowly stopped Saying goodbye to the mother I loved It’s not easy at all for anyone When someone you love no longer exists That night when I saw you stood in my room I felt that you had come to say all’s well I said “I love you mom and always will” Then you went from sight in heavenly flight.
Dearest mother I miss you dreadfully The loveliest mom anyone could have An angel in heaven As you were on this earth A special someone is gone from my world.
21st October 2021 * * * Let’s Mix it up Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme - Death 2 line unrhymed couplet 8 line unrhymed imagism poem An unrhymed Limerick

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Date: 11/4/2021 2:45:00 PM
Belle, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/4/2021 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Constance, it was a pleasure to enter your contest and a joy have received a placement…Belle
Date: 11/3/2021 6:20:00 PM
Dear Belle, I truly feel the depth and breadth of the poignant beauty of your poem. Rich emotions spill so lovingly from your lovely pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/4/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Susan, your replies are so encouraging dear friend. Kindest regards, Belle
Date: 10/31/2021 12:45:00 AM
A beautiful poem on the revisiting of the mother. Great narration. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/31/2021 3:26:00 AM
Christuraj, I write this from the heart and as it truly was. Thank you… Belle
Date: 10/30/2021 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement. Sorry to read of your loss. peace be with you. Many blessings.
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Date: 10/30/2021 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Adam, although it’s been thirteen years since losing my mother, she’s never far from mind ever. Bless you, Belle
Date: 10/30/2021 6:45:00 AM
BIG congrats on your win, Belle. Quite a touching, heartfelt write.
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Date: 10/30/2021 4:31:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed Vijay, most grateful… Belle
Date: 10/29/2021 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful yet sad story/win. So sorry about your mom. I know all about it. It is hard. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 10/29/2021 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Paula, it’s comes to us all and yes it’s hard to carry on when your mother is gone. Many blessings… Belle
Date: 10/25/2021 10:41:00 PM
Belle, your poem is so touchingly beautiful. I lost my mom 6 years ago, and though I miss her terribly, I have such happy memories of our times together. Evelyn
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Date: 10/29/2021 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn, our mother is never gone from our heart, in memory she lives on… Belle
Date: 10/22/2021 9:48:00 AM
Hi Beautiful Belle! Best wishes...you write so well Pangie
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Pangie, I truly appreciate you… All the best, Belle
Date: 10/21/2021 12:03:00 PM
My son never realised what an exceptional mother he had until she was gone. Happy that did not happen to you!
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:55:00 PM
I always knew my mother was special, I’m sure your son felt the same about his mother too. Thank you Rico… Belle
Date: 10/21/2021 7:15:00 AM
Moms are special. When they leave for their heavenly home, we miss them terribly. I still can’t believe my mom left six months ago but my dad’s unending tears contest it is indeed true. Sorry for your loss no matter if now or years ago. <3
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:53:00 PM
It’s been thirteen years since I lost my mom and still miss her and think of her every day. I’m very sorry for your loss too Kim… Belle
Date: 10/21/2021 6:56:00 AM
such a touching piece Belle, I know i am so lucky to still have my mum:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/24/2021 2:50:00 PM
You are lucky Jan… Thank you, Belle :-) hugs back xx
Date: 10/21/2021 1:24:00 AM
Brings memories of the times I took my mother for a drive and stop at some restaurant for a beer and some eats. Lovely poem, thanks for the reminder.
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Date: 10/21/2021 5:37:00 AM
Those are lovely memories Victor, I have fond memories of all the things with mom I used to do… Belle
Date: 10/20/2021 11:18:00 PM
Quite a sad one Belle, I too was with my mother when she passed, you never forget them. Hope you're well. Tom
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Date: 10/21/2021 1:10:00 AM
You never forget Tom, will SoupMail later, have a lot going on at the moment…. Belle