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his weathered hands-- gentle brushes through empty spaces

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
Amazing poem...wow, this is great
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Date: 6/21/2017 2:34:00 PM
This is awesome Nikko. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Aloha, Connie
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 6/26/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie :)! Aloha to you as well :)!
Date: 6/21/2017 1:17:00 PM
love it ;) congratulations on your win ~*
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 6/26/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve :)
Date: 6/21/2017 1:24:00 AM
Way to go Nikko I am SO SO SO delighted to see your name on the winner's list with this little beauty! Three very worthy winners!!! Many many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 6/21/2017 11:58:00 AM
Hi Jan, thank you :D Your enthusiasm here made me smile, and I appreciate how delighted you got, I am very humbled that I placed along side Andrea and David :)
Date: 6/20/2017 11:36:00 PM
wow, Nikko. we did it!!! I can't believe I won and look at YOU. This is fantastic!!! a huge congrats to you, dear friend!!(I love how romantic this is)
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 6/21/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thank you, I am so happy that you won 1st place, sweetie pie :D! You better believe that you won since you truly deserve it with your awesome cherry blossom haiku! I'm also very happy that I placed, amazing that I did, actually. Btw, I find that really cool that you perceived this as romantic, even after I wrote this, I find myself putting other interpretations to this.

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