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A Six-Year-Old Boy's Letter to Santa--Nursery Rhyme

I’ve been such a good boy this year. I know you are able to hear and see what I do and what I say too. I’m happy ‘cause Christmas is near. I’m not asking you for a lot. I most want a talking robot, the game Peggle Blast,* some Legos, and last, a puppy, and I’ll name him Spot. My big sis has been good as me. She helped Mama put up the tree. She does all her chores and takes me outdoors to play. She’s as sweet as can be. She hasn’t wrote you for a while. Here’s how you can make my sis smile. Please bring her a ring; she’ll call it her “bling.” And Skechers, please. You know her style.
Love Your Friend Bobby Please forgive the errors. Remember~~I’m six! *Peggle Blast is a Puzzle Game developed by Electric Arts. Using an app, you play this Android Game on your PC or Mac. November 23, 2022~~~placed 1st in Eve Roper's contest

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Date: 12/4/2022 2:57:00 PM
Glad to see this on the winners' list. Big congrats to you.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/4/2022 6:28:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 12/4/2022 9:48:00 AM
Janice, cute letter to Santa. Congratulations on your win, . Many Blessings my friend
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/4/2022 6:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve, for sponsoring and for my win!! Janice
Date: 12/4/2022 4:56:00 AM
Adorable, Janice. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/4/2022 6:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charles. Janice
Date: 12/4/2022 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Eve's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/4/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Date: 11/26/2022 11:30:00 AM
How adorable, it feels just like what a six year old would ask Santa (I would want a talking robot too) Good luck with the contest~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2022 5:58:00 AM
Michelle, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 11/24/2022 10:54:00 AM
Awww, you did such a sweet cheery one . Was it supposed to be Christmas theme. I had planned a different topic. Great job, Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/25/2022 10:15:00 AM
THANKS so much! Your comment means a great deal because I seldom write children's poems. No, a Christmas theme is not required. I look forward to reading yours. Janice
Date: 11/23/2022 1:12:00 PM
This is a marvelous poem, Janice. The innocence of childhood shines through. I hope you will submit it to Eve's children's limericks contest.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/23/2022 1:20:00 PM
Milton, thanks SO much. I wrote this for Eve's contest. Janice
Date: 11/23/2022 11:56:00 AM
Great limericks for children Janice, Good luck in the contest and happy thanksgiving for tomorrow. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/23/2022 12:04:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. I wish the same for you! Janice
Date: 11/23/2022 9:48:00 AM
- A lovely and sweet letter, Janice :) - GL in the contest :) -
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/23/2022 12:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice