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A Shadows Head

i am a man with out my shadows head cause i cut a tree with my axes sharp led i got a new job of a wood cutter but i put my life to litter i know time cant come back i wish i had a time sack then i had gone back in time after my work i would sing a rhyme god if you give another chance i will show you a dance how would you feel if you were in my place or happily run in a race i want to be a normal man eating icecream i forgot to tell you it was a bad dream i am going to tell my boss what happend or my shadows head will be chopped

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Date: 2/22/2016 1:44:00 PM
prarthana shankar1, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 10:48:00 PM
happy new year
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Date: 4/17/2013 8:04:00 AM
welcome to the Poetry Soup. good write .
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Date: 4/16/2013 5:13:00 PM
Prarthana :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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