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A Sense of Emptiness

A SENSE OF EMPTINESS Emptiness chasing me Encircling, enclosing encompassing! Where can I flee? Life passing through last phase, Dull hazy sky above to gaze, None to blame or to praise. Static, stagnant life without glamour or glee. Mind walks on emptiness Lone sailor on voyage, sailing aimless. Nothing to achieve more. Nothing to lose from core. Nothing new to explore. Matters little being careful or careless. 12/27/17

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Judith S

Date: 1/14/2018 8:26:00 PM

Congratulations Anisha on your win!! ~Judy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2018 8:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this fine piece.

Constance La France

Date: 1/12/2018 8:22:00 AM

Anisha, congratulations on your win in my contest. Your poem was really sad but beautifully written and I like you layout too!

Lu Loo

Date: 1/12/2018 5:49:00 AM

congrats on your win sweet Anisha ;)-luloo

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/11/2018 11:22:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem, Anisha.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/11/2018 10:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Anisha, so very sad Hugs Eve ~`*

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2017 6:22:00 AM

A very sad poem Anisha, you expressed great sorrow through your words..

Estela Canama

Date: 12/27/2017 4:21:00 AM

There is always a reason to live. The great wisdom that God has given you is one of the best reasons to be thankful. Savor life's blessings in disguise thru your emptiness. Thank you for sharing, Anisha. Keep on writing!