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A Rhyming Wave Poem - Don'T Let It Be

#Rhyming Wave DON'T LET IT BE A RHYMING WAVE POEM ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I kept my word don't let it be! Don't let it, let it, let it be! I sail the seven oceans, free! I sail! Find truth, a must! It's out there, in that I do trust! Yes, I do, I do, I do trust! That somewhere on this planet's crust That reason why they fight! Truth is, all leaders have the right! They have the, have the, have the right! National safety is their plight! Living in luxury! Their peoples' starving! Go look, see! Yes go look, go look, go look see! All starving, living misery! The truth, oh there is more! No choice, forced into fighting war! Why, fighting, fighting, fighting war? People tell the truth, they abhor Their leaders' sadism! I kept my word don't let it be! Their leaders' sadism! ~~~~~~~~~ A link for more info on the 'RHYMING WAVE' format... http://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/rhyming-wave/ #Rhyming Wave

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Alexis Y.

Date: 2/17/2018 5:16:00 PM

Hi Mick, I've never seen this form. I like the repeated emphasis on the topic, it made it more impactful. Good content and rhymes. Thanks for introducing me to this form . I may give it a go:-) Alexis

Mick Talbot
Date: 2/17/2018 8:41:00 PM

Hi Alexis, I'm glad you like the form and thank you for your kind words too, always appreciated! Give us a nudge if you do have ago, for apart from the examples on the site I have not seen anyone else's. Best wishes... Mick