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A Rhyme In Sixty - the River and the Moon

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The river’s a ribbon on which we row. The moon is a placid blossom of gold, for we, passion-souled, imagine it so! Mirrored in water’s each soft rippling fold is Luna’s lovely pale petal-faced glow and we are sailing on blue silk’s smooth flow! Jan. 28, 2017 for the Contest of Laura Loo

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Date: 2/3/2017 1:13:00 PM
This is lovely, Andrea. The moon and reflections go so well together. Congratulations // Barry
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Date: 2/3/2017 9:56:00 AM
Very serene, Andrea. Stirs up nice memories of the moon reflecting on summer nights. Nice job, thanks, Dave
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Date: 2/3/2017 7:49:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Andrea. Sorry I haven't been around as much as I would like.
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Date: 2/2/2017 9:25:00 PM
Absolutely lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 2/2/2017 8:56:00 PM
Beautifully done!..Larry
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Date: 2/2/2017 8:18:00 PM
Congrats to u n thanks for your visits and lovely comments on my poems
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Date: 2/2/2017 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea...
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Date: 2/1/2017 4:13:00 PM
Andrea, you have such a gift for enormous imagery.....congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/1/2017 2:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 2/1/2017 1:53:00 PM
A beautiful painting, congratulations in order for a lovely poem
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations Andy!!! Well done girl!!! :) big Hugggs!! Love ya!! Deb
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Date: 1/29/2017 7:14:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in your poem, Andrea, and a perfect picture to enhance it! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/29/2017 4:24:00 PM
This is a nice poem! Why is called rhyme in 60? Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/29/2017 4:01:00 PM
Laura Loo. What a lovely River and the Moon name. I like the poem also. Love, Old daver
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Date: 1/29/2017 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful flow of rhyme.
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:38:00 AM
This is so very beautiful, Andrea, good luck in the contest already a winner. Hugs
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Date: 1/29/2017 10:45:00 AM
A very discriptive and placid write Andrea, as always a well worded piece, for us to Enjoy.' I have replied to your earlier soup mail.'
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Date: 1/29/2017 4:21:00 AM
Absolutely enchanting Andrea such a beautiful flow to your rhyme :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2017 4:11:00 AM
Great write on the enchanting moon and the river ride, Andrea:)
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Date: 1/28/2017 10:47:00 PM
Oh how that pic fits the words so well
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Date: 1/28/2017 10:33:00 PM
I really loved this one Andrea! :)
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Date: 1/28/2017 9:45:00 PM
Smooth wonderful read!
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Date: 1/28/2017 8:51:00 PM
An enchanting write Andrea... love it...hugs
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