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a really bad love poem

 
when you're in love you write really bad love poetry when you love a woman you want to relive with her every great moment you ever had both of them. clouds look like hearts, and a few look like ducks you know, quack, quack ducks. if you love someone, you walk into the wrong house you stain your tie during lunch you walk into people (a big guy peoples, he's not happy you run...really fast) to a man in love roses look perfect even if they're tulips ...sorry honey. you build a white picket fence with the pickets wrong side up when you love someone you take out the trash from someone else's house when you love someone you quit your job as a superhero you get rid of your trusty sidekick you give away your bat mobile you give your arch nemesis the bad news. you write goofy stuff, and mickey stuff too. i'm in love so i write really bad love poetry really? really! really? really, i'm in love, so sue me!

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Date: 11/3/2014 3:58:00 PM
this is adorable, Maurice. Your flair and witty style are present. Not your best work, but the wit is there strongly!! well, now i have 5 min. left to do a list for you and get to my house. Been here at the school TOO LONG!!! I'll leave it at soup mail shortly.
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Date: 11/3/2014 3:58:00 PM
hmmm, now i forgot if I remembered to actually click fave on that other one of yours. I better go check!!!
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Date: 9/20/2014 1:29:00 PM
I'd really like to know what you think of one I posted today.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/20/2014 1:30:00 PM
You got it.
Date: 9/20/2014 12:32:00 PM
I loved this of yours And thankfully for all the wonderful comments last night and taking the time to read my poems. I'm not all that confident with responding to comments. Maybe because I feel very untalented not sure so thankyou.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/20/2014 1:26:00 PM
You have a ton of talent. I have really enjoyed what I have read so far.
Date: 8/20/2014 9:26:00 AM
Wow, that is NOT a bad poem.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/20/2014 6:11:00 PM
people here are so sweet. it is appreciated. thank you.
Date: 8/20/2014 12:27:00 AM
Passion makes the write and son.. You got passion!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/20/2014 6:15:00 PM
you are such a great writer. i love reading your work. it is always inspiring. thank you.
Date: 8/19/2014 7:38:00 PM
Ah to be in love....And nothing matters but the one whom you love....Tim
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/20/2014 6:16:00 PM
so true. thank you for taking the time to visit.