A Pure Heart

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Common sense teaches we can be sure our thoughts aren't always fully pure. Vying for one's mind may be heartfelt sincerity and hypocrisy. The good can win against sin. The way? Pray. May 28, 2021 entered in the Open Poetry Contest 5 Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot

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Daniel Turner

Date: 6/10/2021 7:43:00 PM

It is a never ending battle for me, Janice. The older I get the more cynical I become. I am one of those people who tends to say what I think and it has gotten me into trouble all of my life. Not sure prayer helps much when I keep making the same mistakes:)