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A Proposal On a Sunny Afternoon

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In melody with the song "Chariots Of Fire"

I would climb any mountain I would swim across the ocean If I could reach out and touch the stars Ya know, babe... I would I would run through the desert I would bare the North Pole I would live with you forever, babe If you said... I could 'Cause you give me love 'Cause you give me life 'Cause you give me hope, babe Would you be my wife! Ya know how I feel, girl Ya know that I pace Ya know how my smile...glows When I see your face I'll never ever leave you... Outside in the rain I promise to love you, Babe I'll never complain 'Cause you give me love 'Cause you give me life 'Cause you give me hope. babe Would you be my wife! A Song Of Hope Poetry Contest Sponsor John Hamilton 7-14-2020

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Date: 8/9/2020 10:53:00 AM
I hope she says, "Yes," Charlie. There is a special type of hope that forms when we meet "the one." Your lovely lyrics go well with the melody. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 8/9/2020 6:36:00 AM
What a fragrant melody of love Charlie. This is gorgeous! Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/9/2020 5:14:00 AM
Fabulous poem, Charlie!:-) I love it. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/8/2020 9:48:00 PM
Great love song from the music loving Charlie! Congrats on your win, my friend!
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Date: 8/8/2020 7:17:00 PM
Thanks charles for your entry, congrats on a nice placement!
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Date: 7/16/2020 10:21:00 AM
True or false it is a certain win for any lady and most definitely a win for the contest. Blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 7/14/2020 7:27:00 PM
This is a sweet, romantic song, Charles. A lady couldn't refuse a serenade proposal! GL in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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