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A Perfect World

In a perfect world Mesmerising sunrise to effulgence of moon, Mysteries manifold unveiling nature's boon, Morning hymns and melody of chirps, Vibrant colours of flowers as butterflies flutter, Calm oceans depths while rowdy seashores, So much to cherish to thrive and nurture, Endless love and emotions, His immense blessings, We indeed are living in a perfect world !! But for the upcoming greed cropping up selfishness, The anger and animosity, enmity going malignant, aftermath wars. Till we could awaken incite kindness of hearts, Rise above inequality and shun digression, Whip wild thoughts out and embrace humanity. To be truly living... In a perfect world, And in perfection !! Written Feb 17th, 2016 Awarded N/A Entered for contest"Second chance" by Broken wings Entered for "Premiere contest no 13" by SKAT A

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Sarita Milliner

Date: 10/3/2016 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/2/2016 4:58:00 AM

Hi Upma! It's a pleasure to read this lovely poem once again. Big congrats to you on placing first in Skat's contest! Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 10/1/2016 6:13:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 10/1/2016 10:36:00 AM

Dr. Upma, if only we lived in a perfect world...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/1/2016 9:27:00 AM

A 7 for this beautiful top WINNING poem, Upma! Janice

Skat A

Date: 10/1/2016 9:13:00 AM

Dr Upma, Wow.... love this. (and the little trophy says it all). :)Congrats on your win. Stop by my blog "in a perfect world" and celebrate with a smile or two. With Hugs **SKAT**

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/21/2016 2:03:00 PM

Hi Dr. Upma, Congratulations on your deserving win in the contest. I enjoyed the read. Only Love can bring around a perfevt world. I think we shall never have what this world was meant to be. A seven for this excellent write my friend....Vlad.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/21/2016 1:49:00 AM

Well done, a hearty congratulations on your win Dr. Sharma...

Rob Carmack

Date: 3/20/2016 11:49:00 AM

Dr Sharma, my baseline is fatalistic, so these kinds of poems are good for me. Congrats on your placement.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/20/2016 9:55:00 AM

Dr. Upma, congrats on your well deserved placement in the contest :)-luloo

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/18/2016 5:50:00 AM

Hi Dr. Upma, a perfect world indeed until reality comes back and the dream is gone. I would much rather have the dream myself. Your perfect world does seem the perfect place. I can so easily visualize what your words portray and i smile. The thoughts bring me joy. To live as was intended in the beginning that would mean so much. An excellent write. A seven for your Utopia....Vlad.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2016 3:59:00 PM

yes, you are so right. without the love, it would all be for nothing.

Elaine George

Date: 2/17/2016 12:32:00 PM

Sounds like a my kind of world. Wonderful writing, Upma. Elaine

Paul Callus

Date: 2/17/2016 10:31:00 AM

I can see the perfect world through your eyes, Upma! Beautiful! It's a pity that we have to wake up to reality and find that our Utopia is being held to ransom! gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/17/2016 10:36:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughtful comments n wishes Paul!