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Clair De Lune Pensif

A pensive moon lets fall the rain that calls you to a darkened sill, where, apprehensive, you remain, held captive in her thrall until she waxes at the window pane to ask intently if you'll still be back when she's gone past her wane Beyond the glass, you swear you will...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/18/2018 6:50:00 PM
Last but certainly not least Lycia! I would have had this beauty placed higher. I loved it, especially the personalization of your ending! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/19/2018 4:13:00 AM
Thank you, Connie! xoxo
Date: 8/18/2018 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/18/2018 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! xoxo
Date: 8/17/2018 1:51:00 AM
Lovely, Lycia, packs a punch in a few lines, congrats! Viv x
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/18/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Viv! xoxo
Date: 8/16/2018 8:10:00 PM
A hypnotic look from the window sill tonight......thanks for a different look at the moon Lycia !! Congrats to you !!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/18/2018 3:08:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Thank you! xoxo
Date: 8/16/2018 7:16:00 PM
Lovely, Lycia. Congrats on your win.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/18/2018 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, LG! xoxo
Date: 4/26/2017 9:14:00 AM
This is wonderful Lycia. It is so creative. I love poems about the moon. And this one is outstanding! 7 ; )
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Lycia Harding
Date: 5/3/2017 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. I love to personify nature and the moon is my favorite subject! xoxo

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